campfire while snowing WIP

i was working on somethings an im slowly making progress here but its coming along slowly but im getting cici's gift done but im wanting to improve abit first so im doing a few randoms so i can do it right for her an anyone else
i made the BG darker so it would seem like its at night stars twinkle the moon seems to fit right to me but idk an seems to flow smooth with what 3 of my friends think but you tell me...
also added a song into it but its being worked with an im seeing how it'll fit an once i finish it fully done an i know im somewhat decent i'll work on other stuff enjoy an the songs not final yet so don't ask me if it is or not
also i noticed it starst to lag some near the end idk why its doing that when it shouldn't so im growling at it to work right when its been smooth so download if if ya want it might help as said not final
EDIT* i fixed the Lag apparently another Vcam snuck into one of the timelines without me knowing it -.- so i growled at it for being bad but least its not lagging at the end so its fixed now its flowing smoothing then it was so its good now