i found this from
journal an i said oh why not i reguardless i think DarkFox is a balanced character ... darkfoxprojectx.deviantart.com…
anyways here ppl
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[X] They are physically strong. - only due to his mechanical limbs <<
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color - umm...ppl we change colors so we're not the same...the hells this got to do with being a mary sue...
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color - again the hells it matter!
[ ] This happens to be red -.....the fuck?
[X] Their eyes change color - only when he changes into corruption form - ello sonic's changes to freaking gold when gone super sonic! -
[X] They have wings - only due corruption -
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal.
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc - does talkin to others mentally count <<? -
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death - robotnik killing his mother after the village was burned to ashes...-
[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are
[X] They are currently in a relationship
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. -he is able to summon spirits that was embounded within as a pup that counts i guess-
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
[X] They have a guardian spirit - ok who the fuck doesn't...an belive it or not its his dead mother!!
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age/at some point
[ ] They have a wife/husband/fiance that they were separated from/was killed
[X] They are connected with a certain element - mixture of darkness an fire -
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain label.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga -...umm right ever heard of trying ppl =.=....
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are very mysterious/dark - at one time yes
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition - if you consider having mechanical limbs a permanent medical condition i guess it counts if not then ok-
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
DarkFox Kitos Corruption - 14pts.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.